My name is Janasia
As you already know
Miss crazy and caring from head to toe.
As most people can see,
I get a little frustrated
When people do the most and don't know how to say it.
"It's Juh-nae-shuh "
I loudly pronounce
As I clap my hands and I begin to pounce.
I do understand
My name is unusual
So I create nicknames for myself that are rueable.
Such as " nae, nasia, janae, and JJ,
Nae nerd, jdog, ninja and nae nae,
Nina, loca, peanut and nana,
Pero, noonie, cricket, mama.
Despite all alternatives,
I prefer my real name
It's unique and different so I have no shame.
I am prideful like a lion,
But a flower jumping high
My name was eaten by the Spanish
and spit up like a fly.
I am proud of my name
Because it fits me just right
Short, sweet and sassy
Like my personality and height
Awesome poem !!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI likeed your poem good job
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DeleteThe rhyming was perfect and the poem was really creative!!
ReplyDeleteLol so many nicknames. Great rhyme scheme. :)
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DeleteI loved the poem :) the last 2 stanzas were my favorite ! Good Job :) <3
ReplyDeleteI loved your poem , it was catchy. I liked how you named all your nicknames. Good Job ! :)
ReplyDeleteGood job I like your rhyme scheme and how you told all your different nicknames
ReplyDeleteI'm cute I'm cute ;)
ReplyDeleteJanasia, awesome job! I like how you were very creative in your figurative language. Fly vomit... Nice.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the multitude of nicknames (many of which iI will use) and how you described your personality in many examples.
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff, JJ.
I liked how you included all of your different nicknames and you clapped your hands. That that made it feel like the poetry was coming alive. You wrote it wonderfully
ReplyDeleteI like that you said some of your nicknames were "rueable".
ReplyDeleteI loved the part where you said short, sweet and sassy just like your personality and height ;* over all good poem, I really liked it <3
ReplyDeleteLoved your poem and all your nicknames but you forgot J-Lo -.- good job (:
ReplyDeleteI like the way your poem rhymed and how you gave all of your nicknames. The last stanza was funny. Really good poem.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your poem! It was fun to read, and I led how you talked about the lion then spitting it up and etc i thought it was cool how you made that flow and it was funny and interesting and overall well written!!! Well done!,
ReplyDeleteI love how you talked about being short, because short people are the best. I also likes the part about having pride like a lion. I thought it was a really cool simile. It was really good.
ReplyDeleteGood job I like your rhyme scheme and how you told all your different nicknames
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